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November 2022
Vol VII No IV
Published quarterly:
February, May, August,
and November.
Haiku
with Kevin McLaughlin
Become A Light in the World
Alan Watts wrote “Haiku frequently concerns itself with simple, seemingly trivial material of everyday life with things, however significant on the surface, which are precious treasures and inexhaustible riches to those who learn not only to look, but also to see.” This is accomplished by awakening to the inner nature of mind. The haiku poet develops, perhaps gradually, a higher state of consciousness. The intent of many philosophies and religions is transcendence, rising above the simple drudgery that concerns the non-spiritual individual. Transcendence is the craft of the haiku poet.
The mind sees the world as sacred. But adventitious occurrences mask the sacred nature of our world, they dull the mind. Writing haiku is similar to meditating. Both can lead to a degree of perfect awakening. Become a Light in the world. See the essence of the ordinary, the thing-in-itself — and reveal it.
White caterpillar,
Undulates down trash bin:
Cawing of a crow.
Kevin McLaughlin
Corine Timmer is an artist, publisher, and award-winning poet living in the south of Portugal, between the sea and the Algarvean hills.
ebb and flow . . .
the ever-changing shape
of the sandbarrier
First published in Gratitude in the Time of COVID-19: The Haiku Hecameron.
leaf-strewn street —
my reflection
in a passing hearse
First published in Iris International Haiku Magazine, No. 5, 2019
feuillemorte —
the color
of his voice
First published in Frogpond.
Corine Timmer
Mona Bedi catches the flow of life in a poem that would speak to an archeologist.
spring thaw
inside the icicle
a frozen bee
(Despite the extreme brevity, this haiku conveys the essence of nature beyond any Wordsworth poem.)
Mona Bedi
Paweł Markiewicz is never totally separated from the haiku mind. He is a frequent BTS contributer.
under an old oak
at dawn the chalice was dug
by ancient druids
Paweł Markiewicz
Nicholas Gentile is retired and lives in York, South Carolina.
joining the goldfish
a croaking frog
dawn’s silence broken
(The sheer beauty of a frog barking.)
Nicholas Gentile
Minal Sarosh of India brings the mundane to a higher dimension.
midday sun
the herder snoring
the neem tree awake
long walk
a frog hopping in
the rain puddle
hospice window
twirling with the kite’s tail
mother’s breath
(Haiku can be very powerful. This is one such verse.)
Minal Sarosh
Francesca Leader won the first prize in the Society of Classical Poets’ 2021 translation competition with her translation of “Iroha,” an iconic Japanese poem.
Clouds billow and spread,
Soaking up the emptiness,
Mopping up the sky.
First published in Issue 67 of The Haiku Journal.
The shudder of life;
Wet anxiety to be;
Sharp shoots pierce the earth.
Grass vibrates with sound.
Wind or crickets — who can say?
They share the field’s harp.
Today a kestrel
Paused in your garden to drink
And you never knew
Francesca Leader
Noel King hails from Tralee, Ireland. His poetry collections have been published by Salmon Poetry. A short story collection, The Key Signature & Other Stories, was published by Liberties Press.
the skin of the sun
shadows
my pet rat
trains brushing edges
of trees reaching to embrace
across the tracks
(Inspired integration of man’s machines with nature.)
Noel King
Ram Krishna Singh, raised and educated in Varanasi, India, is a widely published poet whose work has been translated into many languages.
awake, cross legged
till witching hour —
no means no
lonely hours
restlessness of night
breathe satyr
dark fears —
loping in the street
mantra on lips
miles away
stars cease to twinkle:
no new moon
Ram Krishna Singh
Padmini Krishnan is an Indian national. She currently resides in the United Arab Emirates.
another winter morning
the monotonous song
of a robin
(Monotonous, but beautiful in this verse.)
Padmini Krishnan
Debbie Strange is an internationally published poet and haiga artist whose creative passions connect her more closely to the world and to herself. She lives in Manitoba, Canada.
transience . . .
petal by petal
we let go
Winning Haiku, 2017 Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival Haiku Invitational.
fog deepens
the sound of rabbits
nibbling night
Grand Prize, 2016 World Haiku Competition.
stone cairns
a faded cap drifts
downriver
First Place, 2015 Haiku Society of America Harold G. Henderson Awards.
Debbie Strange
Featured
Steve Brisendine lives and works in Mission, Kansas.
sway of yellow —
two goldfinches perch
on dead sunflowers
(Are dead sunflowers as beautiful as live flowers? Mr. Brisendine sees them, perhaps, as equals.)
Steve Brisendine
Joshua St. Claire is an accountant who works as a financial controller in Pennsylvania. He is a two-time Pushcart nominee.
sunspots
the darkness we can’t see
even when we look
(John Keats would have loved this seeming contradiction.)
Lyrids
spruce candles
never reach the Earth
winter morning
on the window
cherry blossoms
Sagittarius
setting down his quiver
waterlilies
(A juxtaposition of mythology with nature.)
Joshua St. Claire
James Presley of Sedan, Kansas, is currently a wrestling coach (well done, Sir!) and a writer of haiku that seamlessly blend disparate elements.
voice once an echo: now
a distant dirge drowned out by
the crickets chirping
headlights stab the night
and the darkness once wounded
bleeds a deeper black
chickens scratch for corn
they strut and cluck — heretics
speaking in tongues
James Presley
Simon Kaeppeli is a scientist who retained interest in writing poetry from his teen years.
Red bleeds into black
As night finally recedes
The stars laid to rest
Echoes in the trees
Sunlight filters through the leaves
We remain hidden
(This evokes the mood of a pagan ritual for this Irishman.)
Simon Kaeppeli
Diane Webster of Delta, Colorado, enjoys the challenge of transforming images into words to fit her poems.
She continues
to drag her reflection
through rain puddles
Sunshine warms . . .
peeking through the privacy fence
forget-me-not blooms
Diane Webster
B. Michael Hughes approaches haiku as a forum to perfectly encapsulate any moment . . . haiku mind.
Bluebird glides
in pursuit of breakfast . . .
A perfect descent
(Easy to envision this graceful act.)
Sound over Pennsylvania prairie
An owl hoots
above grizzly slumber
In magnolia brush
Butterfly en route
Riverwater blues
B. Michael Hughes
Laurie Kuntz has attained that state wherein she has become integrated into the natural world. She’d make a fine companion for a walk in the forest.
Whisper of a dead mother's voice:
the stillness of trees
before a burst of fruit
Caught between the angry
conversation of sea and shore
shells remain silent
The wind talks
a solitary leaf falls
from the red maple
Laurie Kuntz
S Denny resides in San Angelo, Texas, and is a graduate of the University of Texas. Mr. Denny is very much a master of the classical style.
winter’s final frost
from ice to water to air;
white crocus breaks ground
silhouettes in blue
calmly wade through lakeshore reeds;
herons forage food
eves dripping water
summer monsoon’s wet deluge
pathway pebbles shine
S Denny
Angelo B. Ancheta is a freelance writer who writes haiku and other short poems. His works have appeared in various journals.
explosions
under a blue moon . . .
how minor keys sound
no sunrise
the rooster's crow
I miss again
Angelo B. Ancheta
C.P. Kennedy lives in the New York City area.
Fallen leaves fly
a fractured wind, sun —
distant mountains form.
(Ah, a description of a fractured wind juxtaposed with distant mountains.)
Morning, a spring frost
the dog’s brown eyes are suns of
a new universe.
C.P. Kennedy
“The mind can make a heaven of hell, or a hell of heaven.”
— John Milton
Kevin McLaughlin
Yet once more I encourage all haiku writers to share their work, their insights into the nature of all things, with fellow poets and BTS readers.
For those interested in haiku, I recommend you cast back into the BTS archives and reference the September 2016 column.
It provides a pretty thorough explanation of the basic format.
—Kevin Mclaughlin
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